tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30210943.post2630535905599909832..comments2024-03-28T15:17:03.077-04:00Comments on Type M for Murder: Making gerunds history: tips from a summer spent revisingBarbara Fradkinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06992196707567972990noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30210943.post-66120147434911997792018-08-03T06:15:46.523-04:002018-08-03T06:15:46.523-04:00And yet, "Why are you moving away?" prec...And yet, "Why are you moving away?" precisely and vividly expresses the continuity and immediacy of motion. "Why do you move away?" would be stilted, wouldn't it? (The baby, the bath water....) <br /><br />Congratulations on your impressive application of bariatric surgery.<br />Annanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30210943.post-35745735347783809242018-08-02T14:08:40.165-04:002018-08-02T14:08:40.165-04:00Nicely written!!Nicely written!!Thomas Kieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02958985290683779166noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30210943.post-26621509324055040852018-08-02T13:03:23.027-04:002018-08-02T13:03:23.027-04:00What great tips! And you have a lot of grit and st...What great tips! And you have a lot of grit and strength to be able to cut 20K words from your novel. Donis Caseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15207228706777377242noreply@blogger.com