Shorter

 I (Donis) am doing rewrites on a new book. The first draft came in at 108,000 words, mainly because this is a whole new setting and cast of characters for me, and I spent a lot of time wandering around and getting to know them. So that's done. Now I have to get the MS down to a manageable size, and believe me, it is not proving to be an easy task. I do love my own voice.

If you want to keep your readers' attention, however, cut to the chase. Especially these days, as many readers have no patience with description or exposition. In fact, I once heard a Famous Author say one of the best things he ever did to improve his novel-writing style and technique was to learn to write poetry. I've pondered this statement and I must agree that there is nothing like poetry to teach you to use the fewest possible words to make the biggest possible impact on the reader.

The amazing thing is that once you've written a few poems, once you've learned to fit your idea into the shortest possible form, your long-form style automatically changes without your having to even think about it. Your prose gains a vigor it didn't have before, because its power isn't dissipated in a miasma of unnecessary words.

That's the idea behind haiku, the style of Japanese poetry that strives to make a point, capture a moment, punch you between the eyes. To give you a powerful image in seventeen syllables, three lines of five, seven, and five.

I was looking for a few gorgeous haiku to use as an illustration of the beauty of brevity, a couple of gems about nature and mankind by great ancient practitioners like Basho. Instead I came across translations of several modern haiku written by software geeks in Japan for use as computer error messages. I think they show that an ancient form can serve modern sensibilities dandily.

Windows has crashed/I am the Blue Screen of Death/No one hears your screams.

Three things are certain/Death, taxes, and loss data/Guess which has occurred?

Yesterday it worked/Today it is not working/Windows is like that.

You step in the stream/But the water has moved on/This page is not here.

Serious error/All shortcuts have disappeared/ Screen. Mind. Both are blank.

Another Anthology Event

 by Sybil Johnson

I spent last Saturday afternoon at The Last Bookstore in Studio City for a Sisters in Crime/L.A. anthology event. As you may remember, I talked about the previous event for Angel City Beat that was held in Vroman’s in Pasadena.

I’m very happy to be part of this anthology and have really enjoyed these events. They were both a little different. At Vroman’s we each read from our stories and talked about why we chose the professions for our protagonists. This time around we talked about the inspiration for our stories and how it tied into the anthology theme. We also talked about how our protagonists are like us. For me that was being a bit analytical and loving libraries.

It was interesting to see where people get their inspiration from. There’s a good variety of stories in the anthology. 

The bookstore was also interesting. It’s a fairly new one, an offshoot of The Last Bookstore in downtown Los Angeles. The space used to be a prop house where TV and movies would get props for their projects so it’s quite large. There are various rooms and interesting sculptures, which seemed to be for sale. Here are some photos for you: 

 

Vanishing Book Reviews

by Charlotte Hinger

The mother of all book reviews is the New York Times. The lucky author whose book is reviewed by this prestigious publication will see sales leap. We should all be this fortunate. The other "best" places to be reviewed are Publisher's Weekly, Kirkus Reviews, Library Journal, and Booklist.

Kirkus Reviews gives a prize of $50,000 to the best fiction book, the best non-fiction, and young reader's literature. Wow!

But here's the rub when it comes to reviews. Library Journal gets more than 60,000 requests a year. So does Booklist. That's 5000 a month, 1200 a week, 250 books a day. Kirkus Reviews receives 200 submissions per day.

My Recent historical novel, Mary's Place, did not get reviewed by any of these publications. Previously, two of my mysteries received starred reviews from Kirkus, and all of my other historical novels had been received by at least one of the magazines.

I was disappointed. Dumb me, I had not realized how much the publishing world had changed. Review sections are much smaller. Magazines are thinner because of the price of paper and because of the decrease in advertising revenue.

All of the places which grant reviews have guidelines. Following guidelines is crucial. One of the most constant "rules" is to submit a book about four months ahead of publication.

Here are the guidelines from Kirkus Reviews:

The following guidelines are intended to help publishers get the right titles into the right hands at the right time so they can receive consideration.

WHEN TO SUBMIT Kirkus will consider titles that are submitted as digital galleys or e-books at least 4-5 months before publication date. As soon as a book is reviewed—usually 2-3 months before its publication date—the publisher is notified of the review rundate.

WHAT TO SUBMIT We consider all new adult hardcover or original trade-paperback fiction, general-audience nonfiction, and children’s and teen books. Editors make individual judgments about coverage based on merit or potential interest.

Kirkus does not review books in the categories listed below in its traditional program. (Kirkus Indie does not put genre or publication date limits on submissions; see more information about that program here.)

—already published books
—reprints of books that Kirkus has previously reviewed
—self-published titles
—print-on-demand titles
—poetry (except children’s and teen)
—cookbooks
—crafting books
—guidebooks, including travel guides
—personal finance
—textbooks
—specialized technical or professional works
—any work intended primarily for an academic audience
—reference books
—instruction or how-to manuals
—screenplays or other dramatic scripts
—computer and technology handbooks
—books of regional interest

Fortunately, there are oodles of websites created by book bloggers who might give your book the attention it deserves.